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cast off care like blue
snowfields into rigid water,
and wash with mud the thrust
of earth, our skin soft as salt mines.
built you are
of bitch and buttercream,
of soured elements in the blue
dot of a pin-prick spotlight
and windowed skull.

we can watch the fire fade
into a black rat canvas,
into blue gates that tumble up
and loose finger grooves,
smear eyes across your face like warpaint,
faster and faster,
momentum in the race to nowhere.

and once done, we turn,
we go aground and push
up the lines of blue backs
orbiting the moons of that
rising ass, around corners,
a shattered life in starshine,
the masks
beneath the dream
of every glance.
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Based loosely upon the following picture, as per #transliterations prompt 9: [link]

This may not be erotic to anyone but me. Hard to say. I love the picture and it brought out a lot of things deep, beautiful, and bad.
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Given 2011-11-15
blue sluice by *Quemaqua suggester writes: Blue Slice has an understated flavor and portrays a relationship in an intricate way. ( Suggested by =angelStained and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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~Quemaqua Feb 3, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you much! I continue too appreciate the DLD support. You guys are awesome!
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You are quite welcome! :hug:
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:icondavidpoet30:
i really love this its an awesome piece
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~Quemaqua Nov 16, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks so much, mate. I appreciate that.
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:icondavidpoet30:
no problem i really loved it and i hope you check out mine and you are like emily dickison in your writing keep it up and may i read this at an open mic as long as i credit the author so of course i will need your real name email to me on here please
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~Quemaqua Nov 18, 2011  Professional Writer
My name's no secret around here, I'm Michael J. Riser. You're more than welcome to read the piece if people know who wrote it, and if you direct them on to my website ([link]), so much the better!

Good luck with your writing.
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:icondavidpoet30:
thanks michael and i will be sure to read it tonight at an open mic i am attending
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Congrats on the DD, love! :heart:
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~Quemaqua Nov 15, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you. =)
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